simpforsangwoo's Topics (13)

Got disagree, sure there are some things that can be written better but the writing doesn't suck and let be real, there are worst bl manhwa out there *war flashbacks* anyway, the story has not gone downhill it actually improved since its comeback. I just think some of yall just say it's bad is because the series is a slow paste and a very slow burn and some of yall don't like that there isn't a decision of who's firmly ML.

Pretty sure the writing sucks. The pacing is off. The author themselves doesn’t seem to know who to choose. They haven’t made ANY of the characters really likeable other than their image but that’s more on the artist than the author. The plot is messy and incomplete in some places. Cain is a dog so why does a dog have lust and love for their master? Yahwi is broken yet not once has anyone in his life suggested therapy. The part where they made it so yahwi and jooin met in the past was thrown in randomly and there was no prior hints that they knew each other especially not in the first half of the book. Jooin is indecisive and a horrible main character. The main character is the one we as readers are meant to cheer on but I don’t really know if anyone who read this book still cares about jooin at all. Personally, I want him to fall of the face of the earth, go to therapy to learn not to play with everyone else’s emotions for him to feel safe within himself and to never reintroduce himself to the 2 ML. All of it is just so sloppily put together and I know the author had a vision but I think they only thought of the concept and are just taking this as they go. They don’t seem to have any real direction with where this is going. Last few chapters, he told cain to leave and that he’s done with cain and he told yahwi he’s done with him too but now he wants cain back? Shouldn’t the author have made it so that they didn’t have the conversation where jooin literally asked cain to leave if this was the case? It’s bad writing. Sure there is worse but just because something could be worse, doesn’t mean it can’t be bad right now.

yeah, they really succeeded at making MC the most unlikable character ever. I just hope this mess comes to a conclusion soon, it's been dragging for way too long.

At this point, it’s like watching a plane crash into a train full of people and you wanna stop looking at it but you literally can’t. I want it to be over so I can forget I ever read it.

Couldn't have said it better myself. Big regret picking this one.

I only picked it cause yahwi looked pretty and I have a thing for cat eyes

It's caught up.

Don’t mind me

I hate the uke More than the villain The uke is an headache FR THAT'S WHY I DROPPED THIS

I totally forgot about that and now that you've reminded me, my heart hurts more :cc

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