beta
Unfortunately I've lost all good feelings from this pairing. The bottom being obsessed and whatnot suddenly turning into "no you don't" didn't come off as insecurity, because where has that been before? He was ready to sleep with him, but he can't accept that he likes him? Bad writing. I might drop or let it marinate, because it's NOT "giggle and kick my feet cute" for me to watch this top struggle with a bottom who acts like mentally challenged child, not a traumatized adult. If you disagree that's fine, don't come at me lol