This used to be one of my favorites, and tbh I can see why, but at the same time, I can't. I'm a writer, and the way certain things were written like the fish bowl plot was amazing, but the more you went into the story, the more you saw wasted potential. It could've been amazing with or without more chapters, but the author just had to add certain things in to make it an abusive circle. Highly disappointed in this, but on another note, I have literally never seen the fourth wall been broken so many times in one story lmao
I- did you say you were a writer?? excuse the fact I was being a stalker, YOU WRITE TOO?? omfg, you’re perfect LMFAO
on a side note, I have to agree with you, I remember both falling head over heels for bits of this but also getting miserably disappointed that they didn’t tug on all my heart strings and take advantage of all the opportunities in their hand for this story :,)
I could drag this to hell, but I know you delousion rape lovers will come for me. Anyways, don't read this. I should've listened to my friends when I had the chance and actually not read it, cause this was plain romantisized rape, over and over again. It's funny how you people will claim this is romance, when the only development Keith had was buy him shit, and stop raping him. Pls, it's sad. Never in my life have I ever rated something one star, so I guess this will be the only achievement this story will get.
Im confused why so many of you are empathizing for the dad? It wasn't like he suffered anything at all, mind you every problem that was created, was created by him himself. His poor wife though, imagine marrying someone, only for them to turn you that unstable. I also feel so bad for the mc. Can't even imagine how it felt realizing your own father brainwashed you to believe murder was normal and okay, then brainwashed you to make you feel like it was all your fault.
I have to be honest, while I loved it I'm not satisfied with the ending. I honestly really wished he didn't live with his father anymore for many reasons, one being the amount of mental abuse his father inflicted in him was just unforgivable. I felt like he went back to his father, not because he truly knew his father was going to start doing better, more so he still had that piece in him where he's desperate for his validation, and so when his father needed his validation instead, he immediately went back satisfied with just one "im sorry" when it's not close to being enough it make up for what he did to him. Another thing I really wished was an ending where Kwon would've gotten him the help he needed, not just mentally but actually took care of him physically, and made him move in with him. Overall I really loved this, I just wished he got out of the toxic environments.
I loved this, and I loved everything about the this. The way aspd was so properly represented made me so happy, and I loved how the author really showed they did their research on the disorder before creating the piece. This is honestly one of my new favs, and did anyone else notice how much prettier the color pallet and art got near the end?
Help I started this in 2020 and stopped in 2021 hoping I could read it when it's all done. Fast forward, now about to be almost four years later, it's apparently still not done and theres a princess now involved? Extremely confused