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The Story is starting to piss me off, honestly I hope the ending is bad because I'm sick and tired of the same thing happening.
Seriously The main Owen is starting to make me mad like why would you leave just to come back over and over again.
I was so mad when he left the main character. The main character should've gave up the parental rights and just moved on with his life.
Why would the Main Owen just keep going back in time just for the same thing to happen again, I'm surprised he still so obsessed with Nux I don't know how many times he went back in time but it must have been a lot.
and Lastly I was actually so excited to see if the last Owen would kill Nux but I read ahead and he didn't so I'm disappointed because I wanted the story to go somewhere, it was just getting annoying because in most of the chapters all they did was do the nasty.
Don't get me wrong I love this story and I'm not hating I was just ranting my feelings