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But this is getting boring. Like it has all the plot lines to be great but the delivery is not hitting. The angst is barely there/focusing on the wrong thing. The begging is mediocre I don’t feel no sparks between them. Like the last time I really like their dynamic was when she was at the lake fighting the time reset. I keep reading it to see if it will get better but it’s not.