I swear. Every other “official translation” these days has the most easy to avoid spelling and grammatical errors. Get it together official writers. You have proofers and copy editors for this reason. So my illegal free reading can be uninterrupted lol
My honest review is:
Very bad beat for beat story telling. One second he’s in on the floor, next in his arms, next second he’s on the floor again. No in between, makes me confused if the panels got messed up.
Author-nim seems to write like the characters already know the plot in some way. Plus there’s not reason for him to be invested or so kind to MC. Being bored and having a plaything is fine to an extent as a reason but the weird sprinkles of romance is off when he’s had no need to be so thoughtful or even a monologue of why. Yeah okay, again he’s bored and it’s a business partnership, but one minute he’s rough and uses him more like a thing than a person then he’s just overly romantic again. Without reason. It’s just excessive floof cause we know they end up together maybe?
Also MC is so flippy floppy, one minute, so confident end next second, crying and scared. characters shouldn’t be one dimensional but this wasn’t quite right either.
1.5/5 stars - i don’t write reviews but I’ve never been so flabbergasted with a story and I’ve read A LOT in my 27 years of reading bl
I’ll keep reading it cause im curious about its progression, but it’s a cringe hard to get through read for me.
Also the comment section is meant for reviews of any kind good or bad. So if you disagree with me, that’s fine. Im not here to fight anyone nor will I respond to rude people. We all read a lot of things and love different stuff.
27 years..
Yeah got a problem? I’m allowed to read
no problems mb thats just such a long time. if u dont mind me asking, how old are you?
Old as hell. My bones crack and my back is in constant pain if that helps
No offense uploader. But not everyone catches these things like you may especially if you have the raws and therefore the hindsight. Fucking spoiling the entirety of the mystery man with your side comments at the end of chapter 20 I think was rude as hell. Don’t do that what is wrong with you fr
Edit to add it was chapter 19. Please be careful everyone. This really ruined the mystery for me and the allure of who the mystery man is kind of just ruins the rest of it. Don’t do this ever
Okay I looked up grade school ages in Korea. And average is about 12 years old for the last year of grade school. So let’s assume when he says grade school he’s referring to the last year of grade school
If he’s 28. And he said he would have been in grade school when that boy was born. That means the little boy is at least 16. And that boy is not 16. He’s like 11 max. What’s the math here
I am trying to think about it. But I will just ignore and assume he is saying college or don't know
Hey, I appreciate the scan team. I really do, but i think you guys should drop this one. Your translations aren’t correct and have affected the story telling. To the point where it’s confusing. I wish you well tho and do appreciate the time you spent. Maybe just not this one. The other persons rips make it much easier.
Do u realize the newest upladed chap is offc scan?
What chapter u read tho
Bro, what are you on?
yeah we need to leave this to jujucat
It wasn’t official for a while so
It wasn’t official for a good while. It was a group of two that had no idea what they were doing.
Hot take. Using your partners love and affection for you to emotionally manipulate them into doing what you want is gross and the MC deserves better than a grade
Anyone have link for Raws?
https://newtoki319.com/webtoon/18015819?toon=BL%2FGL
https://newtoon204.com/toon/continue/%EB%AC%BC%EA%B0%80%EC%9D%98-%EB%B0%A4
God bless you