sooo. The plot has real potential, it could have been soo great but..... ITS SOO DRYYYYY, HE HAS NO PERSONALITY AND ALL HES LITERALLY LIKE A SLICE OF BREAD!!!! If they let's say put the great estate developer's Mc in this it's book would immediately be a 5/5 star but it has no flavor. They build such a great plot just for it to be ruined by the blandness of its characters.
Cuz if they stand for nothing what will they fall for.
This is SHIT in its finest meaning. THIS DUMB BITCH MC IS LETTING A MURDERER. STEP ALL OVER HER JUST BECAUSE "she's the og mc and I what it to end normally" BITCH SHE IS KILLING OFF YOUR " precious characters" YOU DAMB LIER IF THESE CHARACTERS ARE SOOOOO PRECIOUS TO YOU, YOU WOULDN'T LET HER CONTINUE TO "Be the main character" AND PUT MORE LIVES IN DANGER! !!! IF YOU LOVE THEM SOOOO MUCH THAN SAVE THEM INSTEAD OF LETTING THIS BITCH JUST DO WHAT SHE WANTS !! YES YOU REALLY ARE THE VILLAIN OF YOU REALLY THINK THAT THIS IS THE RIGHT THING TO DO. YOU. DUMB. SELFISH. BITCH ヽ(`Д´)ノ
GOT ME KICKING AND SHIT