demon13o want to read (All 2797)
beta
After reading 4 chapters, yeah it looks like it might be good, but first I'll let it build up some.
Firstly, the title makes no sense with this plot. The guy didn't even get raised with her as a childhood friend. Secondly, this is progressing so slow and is making less sense as it goes. Introducing 2 more males on top of it just throws the readers into a wtf pool. I had to just drag my feet through the 15 chapters, only to just be curious what the Duke is plotting and couldn't care less about the actual FL or ML.
Can we also talk about the fact the title is giving FL vibes as the MC, but so far we've only seen from the guy's pov most of the time? This writer is confusing me, and I may just leave this to rot unless it can change my opinion. Again, I'd only be reading for the Duke at this rate unless the story can turn me around to read it beyond the Duke.