I was hoping he got his love returned by the sexy Yoru,i mean why the shorty,he HIT A GIRL! SO i dont hate NIichan sorry..SHorty drugs girls an uses them so hes getting just rewards as well! But i was routing for Niichan an Yoru...dang it!
it seem kinda rushed in places,an things were thrown in that made me like huh where did this come from? an like it feels unfinished...sigh...but i still like it
I mean who in their right mind describes a strange girl like he did to his girlfriend.Hey did you see that girl with the nice body over there woo an then says oh i have to go..i mean REALLY??? so i mean if i were her i woulda made him be doing alot of work!
that was soooo very rushed,but so much potential hehehe
No kidding. That was a good read. But the plot could use some work. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭