The flow of this story is throwing me off like we get launched into the main plot almost immediately I know nothing about the characters after 8 chpts...it just seems random and flat which makes it hard to keep up bc it's boring me. The plot does seem to have potential tho. .so ig I'll wait and see how it develops...
Some of ya all in the comments are rlly not used to fluffy stuff huh WDYM ITS GG TOO WELL. Tho ya all got me thinking and I hope there's no unnecessary 3rd party or wtv tho...it'll ruin the pacing and the vibe