MidnightSun's Topics (2)

I really like this story, but the translation keeps getting worse with every chapter until I couldn’t even follow the plot. The names are spelled differently almost every chapter, which you can guess the character to some degree, but when they randomly started using the name Jim for an allegedly established character?? I don’t know who the heck that is, and that was the point I dropped it until I can find a consistent translation.

These last two chapters are an absolute mess, this is why you properly number your files before uploading so it doesn’t look like a scrapbook