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Like I don’t mean any offense but it hurts me that people aren’t understanding such a good take on a generic plot :( The only part that I think could’ve been better explained is the sister, like what lolz aside from that everything else makes sense! Omg and it annoys me so much when people comment on things saying they’re bad but haven’t even read half of it… it’s fine if you think it’s bad after you’ve read through and understood it all but cmon