Constructive criticism: For dialogues, you can add something like “he gasped” , “he cried”, “he yelled” , if you add the same sentence (whatever you call it) it’ll seem bland. You can change the “his self” to “himself”. Your and you’re are two different things, with “your” you add it in a sentence like this: “your ......
POV u was just walking chillin late at night at the park then u saw this https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/koushuu_toilet_danshi_hajimete_no_aokan/
i like incest a lot... but being inconsistent and only liking bl or straight or gl incest is kind of ~not cool~ like just because they're the same sex it's better or something??? (hint: it's not) (⊙…⊙ )ah but i have to say the yuri incest are the bestttt
A angry rant