There is something missing in this story. There has to be. They talk about all this stuff that clearly should have been said already. I feel like were missing at least two or three chapters before this. Not to mention this is to fast and the characters, mostly the male lead is weird. Hopefully the next chapters will give us something but I still feel like it's missing something big time.
Just like the title, some business rival has arrived and may try to break them apart by either making her look like a slut, or him like a cheater. Or that stupid guy says something the girl hears but she runs off before he finishes and it causes a stupid misunderstandings.
Well either way I looking forward to see which comes in to being.
...I'm not in to it at all.
I read the first chapter but after that it all just went by.
The story is to fast and don't like how the uke just falls in love with the seme out of no where and the seme is good looking but creepy. I like the blond brother really.
I'm not getting any personality from the uke and I just don't know about this one yet.
COME ON! I was thinking Mama as going to be interesting, now she's just stupid! Though I fear for Luffy's life.
Ikr? no offense, what's wrong with oda? this seems so plain ridiculous and crazy, it feels like the original one piece kinda no longer exists
We still don't know her wel... and the Vinsmoke seem really interesting and funny to me...
Also this if is inspired on Alice in wonderland, we have to take into consideration that every character there is plainly crazy (because it takes place on a dream and nonesense is used to critizice victorian society... i think)
I love how Oda's storyline twists ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
I AT LAST GET A SHOUJO MANGA LIKE I"VE ALWAYS WANTED! THANK YOU GOD!