You mean to tell me you went crazy looking for this man searching up and down the town and then when you finally meet him and you catch him trying to kill himself you save his life and then belittle him by waving money in his face instead of being worried about the fact that he was literally walking into the ocean, the fact that he felt like he had no other place to go, but to die man he’s never gonna change just a pathetic loser BUT MY BABY STOOD UP FOR HIMSELF !!!! ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
Bro I was putting this off because I assumed it would be toxic or not my cup of tea but it’s actually so sweet to watch how ash brought Lyle to life while giving him his first in lots of categories and I can’t possibly think of anything I would change about this story (well maybe Aiden minding his own fucking business c: ) but definitely good writing and very descriptive I will say there’s lots of effort put in to the dialogue and although the problem is sex it doesn’t REVOLVE around sex sometimes I find myself actually hoping we got more of those moments but the flow and buildup of the sexual tension just eatsssughhhh AND ASH don’t get me started I love the way that man talks dirty
Yall are mad that he’s back with the ml after saying he didn’t want to do it but nothing is done without his consent plus the ml is literally perfect for the mcs personality as someone who also overthinks having someone who’s straightforward and says exactly what they want to do idk I hate overthinking someone’s next move or relationship status in general yes they have problems they could work on but I really think it’s a miscommunication
I don’t think he liked her he just came to care about her and he was pissed his brother would use her to get to him and he didn’t genuinely like her And just because they look alike doesn’t mean he fell for the mc because they look similar some people just have a type and really I don’t think he purposely chose him cause his hair was pink he genuinely loves him idk why yall underestimate his love for him….
No rape they equally lust for each other and she’s proportionately built for a woman I LOVEEEE THIS SLAYYYY them being elves is cuter idk
Cute story hate that it started with rape tho other than that it’s your typical enemies to lovers omegaverse And I need to see babies like rn
Yall saying you’d rather have Howe than someone with a baby like it’s still not in bad taste to date her widowed friend whose wife she was friends with and yeah maybe yall don’t want her back with Linus but I feel like yall are being immature just because he cheated on her which she has gotten ok with and acknowledged that it wasn’t totally his fault and she’s forgiven him and the chemistry is definitely there again idc Howe or Linus just please DONT LOOP TO KEITH I STGGGG ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
This was so stinking cute and their daughter bringing them the ring put icing on the cake …I’m not crying. you are
Yall hoes need to chill it’s the third chapter like I’m confused why yall think stuff is supposed to be happening when the author is rebuilding the climax ???
OMG PICK ONE THE DEAD BITCH OR THE ONE WHO IS ALIVE… (just joking..maybe..probably) YK HOWE FUCKING SUCKS IF LINUS HAS A BETTER CHANCE AND HE FUCKING CHEATED OMGGGGGG LIKE STOP DRAGGING IT one moment he’s depressed then he’s horny the fact he brings up Catherine to justify why he wouldn’t take a chance on Tommy is just fucking backwards and cowardly it’s not that’s he’s doing Catherine a service because he’s already done a couple of questionable things in her absence like JUST CHOOSE TOMMY LOVE TOMMY she is the ONLY person who will accept that you will always love Catherine anyone else wouldn’t deal with it and with the sitch I wouldn’t recommend it
I either sympathize with lil dude or he pisses me off from the lack of ability to do anything right LIKE GAH DAMN IF UR GONNA BE NOSEY BRO SHUT THE HELL UP WHY WOULD U SAY IT OUT LOUD AND WHY WOULDNT U FIND A BETTER PLACE see this is why people get killed inserting themselves clear ur debt do what je ho asked u and keep movinguhhhhhh
The audacity to force me not to judge is crazy I’m judging that’s a CHILD
He’s so crazy and the conflict is so unserious on both sides it’s laughable
why he so freaky this rut ╮(￣▽￣)╭ (not complaining)
Yall expect too much from a story about smut with little plot