Bro I was putting this off because I assumed it would be toxic or not my cup of tea but it’s actually so sweet to watch how ash brought Lyle to life while giving him his first in lots of categories and I can’t possibly think of anything I would change about this story (well maybe Aiden minding his own fucking business c: ) but definitely good writing and very descriptive I will say there’s lots of effort put in to the dialogue and although the problem is sex it doesn’t REVOLVE around sex sometimes I find myself actually hoping we got more of those moments but the flow and buildup of the sexual tension just eatsssughhhh AND ASH don’t get me started I love the way that man talks dirty