Bro I was putting this off because I assumed it would be toxic or not my cup of tea but it’s actually so sweet to watch how ash brought Lyle to life while giving him his first in lots of categories and I can’t possibly think of anything I would change about this story (well maybe Aiden minding his own fucking business c: ) but definitely good writing and very descriptive I will say there’s lots of effort put in to the dialogue and although the problem is sex it doesn’t REVOLVE around sex sometimes I find myself actually hoping we got more of those moments but the flow and buildup of the sexual tension just eatsssughhhh AND ASH don’t get me started I love the way that man talks dirty
Bye I commented this before ash’s rut AND OML YESSSSSSLAWDDDDD my type of freak I swear one thing that man can do is talk dirty in the BEST way this is by far the best rut I’ve seen
YESS!! You get it! The way he was talking during his rut omggg。Ash ate down boots he was so hot.
Don’t move your hand legs up girl I loved it
Yall are mad that he’s back with the ml after saying he didn’t want to do it but nothing is done without his consent plus the ml is literally perfect for the mcs personality as someone who also overthinks having someone who’s straightforward and says exactly what they want to do idk I hate overthinking someone’s next move or relationship status in general yes they have problems they could work on but I really think it’s a miscommunication
I don’t think he liked her he just came to care about her and he was pissed his brother would use her to get to him and he didn’t genuinely like her And just because they look alike doesn’t mean he fell for the mc because they look similar some people just have a type and really I don’t think he purposely chose him cause his hair was pink he genuinely loves him idk why yall underestimate his love for him….
Yesss!!! Thats what i perceived as well and so it made me confused when i read others comments
Yea I’m pretty sure you’re spot on with the interpretation here. Some think the girl had a crush on him because of similarities in looks; and as much as I understand that line of thinking, it was probably a platonic relationship between them and he saw right through his brother’s bs
Yess like they’re acting like he’s cheating or something I don’t get why they feel so betrayed in the comments
I agree even if he did like her this was years ago in high school but to me it seemed more like a close friendship maybe even viewing her as a big sister
Idk she’s weird like taking pictures without permission and masturbating to it is crazy work but then she has the audacity to call him a nasty man for just touching her
No rape they equally lust for each other and she’s proportionately built for a woman I LOVEEEE THIS SLAYYYY them being elves is cuter idk
Cute story hate that it started with rape tho other than that it’s your typical enemies to lovers omegaverse And I need to see babies like rn
Also would like to add that idk why Ppl are surprised at the rape tho it’s trashy and in bad taste but he’s also apart of the yakuza so it’s not totally out of character
Yall saying you’d rather have Howe than someone with a baby like it’s still not in bad taste to date her widowed friend whose wife she was friends with and yeah maybe yall don’t want her back with Linus but I feel like yall are being immature just because he cheated on her which she has gotten ok with and acknowledged that it wasn’t totally his fault and she’s forgiven him and the chemistry is definitely there again idc Howe or Linus just please DONT LOOP TO KEITH I STGGGG ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Just say u like Linus. No one is immature for not wanting Tommy to be with a man who CHEATED on her had a whole relationship with a GIRL for 2 months. That's crazy. I'd rather she be with howe than with both men who betrayed her trust Linus can't get his shit together to save his life he has no business dating til he stops basing his self worth on other people. Between all of these men why would you go with 1 of the 2 cheaters??
No yall are just immature and it keeps yall from seeing his personal growth idgaf what yall have to say
I like whoever Tommy has chemistry with and right now she has great chemistry with Linus and yall keep saying he can’t get his shit together to save his life while he is actively getting his shit together so he can feel better childhood trauma is what the problem is not him necessarily placing his self worth in other people he still judges himself based on how his dad treated and talked to him which is not a wild thing since his dad was very shitty ??? That man is getting his shit together yall just hate him Howe is so pathetic rn he doesn’t know what he wants he’ll always make Tommy unsure if they get together because he keeps playing himself like a sad fiddle “I like you Tommy” “nvm I can’t do the is to Catherine” vs a man whose going for it rn so yeah Linus has a better chance rn and it’s pissing yall off so bad rn it’s not even funny stop looking at the situation from just team Tommy and everyone’s point of view the whole thing is fucked up but I do believe Tommy and Linus could possibly grow together if Howe gets his shit together I most definitely want her with Howe over Linus tho which I said in the first place read next time
This was so stinking cute and their daughter bringing them the ring put icing on the cake …I’m not crying. you are
Why is his dad kinda….