I am utterly perplexed by my own mental fortitude to have made it through 36 chapters of this.... I almost feel proud. Like I've somehow evolved my mental endurance. It's either that or I'm going insane, because this is soooo bad...
I'm sorry, but I don't get the enthusiasm for this one. To me it was very mid. I'm not mad, I spend my time reading it, but I'm also not really happy about it.... I feel like, I've just done a load of laundry...
Yeahh, they're moving wayyyy too fast
This story felt like there's a ton of missing pages throughout the entire thing. Both in terms of their relationship but also in terms of the whole business/inheritance/family plot that feels like the author has written everything but then cut entire segments out every 10 pages of the final story, so you're left with a very shallow end product.
I quite like complicated plots, but there was too many supposedly complicated characters and plots that were never actually shown. There's no reason to make every character uniquely complicated with very complicated connections, if you're not going to dive into it and show us how, they got there.
I don't know much about business, but for it to be a plot that's interesting to read about, I feel like you need to actually show us the work that's put into it and not just tell us in long sentences about what needs to be done and then skip to now it's done.... That's not interesting at all.
It's not a horrible story at all, but it isn't really good either which is a shame because it had sooo much potential. I want to read this story! just in a better version...
Enough ranting from me. I'm probably going to leave this un-rated, because I just don't know...
This story was so mediocre, I can't even hate it, because I've already forgotten most of it. I really wanted to like it since we/I need more stories about more dom/power bottoms and submissive tops as well as more stories about switch/vers couples but this wasn't it... sorry...
Him: "I got you a gift"
Me: "It's 100% a person. I'll put money on Horse-guy"
I sort of expected to get a story with some elements of realism because of the tittle. Real people actions, scenarios, feelings, problems... But instead I got something very very far from that. Like it wasn't even close to being how two people interact and the story felt more like separate scenes playing out rather than a fluent plotline.
It wasn't bad exactly, and I'm not mad, I read it. Just completely forgettable to me.
I'll give this a 7 because, I'm in a good mood, but it's nowhere near the 9.2 it's rated right now in my opinion. It's very mediocre.
If all of you really think you're standing up for queer people by crucifying this young girl you are sadly mistaken and to be honest a little on the stupid side. Whether she is queer or not, she's the spitting image of thousands of desperately scared young queer people who grew up being taught and told they're wrong and hated. And what do terrified people do when someone they care about is about to possibly get hurt by this hate, they come up with stupid ideas..... None of this is cause for such blatant ignorant hate from you hypocrites.... So please shut your faces (me telling you to shut up, does not mean I expect you to do it, nor do I think you're not allowed to speak.... but please? reflect a little at least...)
Omg u said it so well her actions simply reflect the environment she grew in and everyone expects her to learn non homophobic values just cause she lives in the city is the stupidest thing I've heard in awhile
Man just let people be. It’s literally fictional. we hate who we want to hate in fiction and the world still keeps on spinning.
Hahaaha... sorry... but that made me laugh.... You're telling me, I should just let people be, while commenting on my post? Did you get something mixed up or?
Who gives a shit lmfao Trash is trash, just like you are for calling real people stupid over not liking a nosey homophobic bitch
Tell me you were a disgusting homophobic bitch who hated on others without telling me Guess what? It's not okay just because you learned better. Telling us not to hate homophobic characters is ridiculous and reeks of your own guilt issues, since you want to insult people for not liking a fictional character you clearly relate to.
Stype... Imagine trying to come up with something bad to say and not getting anything right..... How much smoke is coming out your ears right now hmm? Are you fuming? All you did was prove my point.... (but I guess, you probably wont see this, since I can't reply to you, Oh well)
Again, just let people be man and that applies to all of us, let people relate who they relate and let people hate who they hate
Nah this homophobic bitch is calling people stupid for not liking a fictional character lol She can deal with everyone knowing why
Other people relate to a charcter and other people hate the character, who cares
Obviously people do
Stype.... bro... are you okay?
anyways my point is we don't call people "hypocrites" for hating on a character and we also don't call others a "Homophobic bitch" for empathizing with a character (both of your opinions and interpretations of the character are valid btw so both of yalls need to calm down and let people be.)
Clearly we do, are you dumb? We're doing it right now. Do you think you're in school, child? Comment hall monitor? Get lost with your self righteous shit
Fair..... I could've made my point without calling anyone a hypocrite or stupid, so I'm fine getting called out for that....
that's quite alright ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ Also, I really liked your interpretation of the character's actions and it really opened a whole new perspective of the character for me. It also shows me how you try to see the good in everyone, we really need more people like you nowadays(๑•ㅂ•)و✧ (also, sry if my first reply to you came off as rude, I'll try to do better next time TT)
I vote we set up this blond douche bully with the uggo drinking bully from the trip - let those two alphas fuck each other up and leave everybody else alone...