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I find myself scrolling past all the sex....

I really want to love this story. I like the premise, I like the character concepts, I like the art, but at 40 chapters you need to either make it smut galore with different things or give me some actual story.
I feel like the same sex in every damn chapter is too much. I don't usually mind a lot of smut, but it's getting utterly boring to me. I want to read their story! but I feel like the longer this gets the more boring it becomes. It's not bad just meh...

I'm going to go read a chapter of "Our sunny days" now - I need healing!

I've read much worse stories than this, with much shittier characters than this, but somehow this is kind of pissing me of more. I'm too damn curious to just drop it, and that pisses me off... Like what is this?

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This story is so wholesome, I have apparently lost my fucking mind!

I vote we set up this blond douche bully with the uggo drinking bully from the trip - let those two alphas fuck each other up and leave everybody else alone...

That's a no from me...

I am utterly perplexed by my own mental fortitude to have made it through 36 chapters of this.... I almost feel proud. Like I've somehow evolved my mental endurance. It's either that or I'm going insane, because this is soooo bad...

I'm sorry, but I don't get the enthusiasm for this one. To me it was very mid. I'm not mad, I spend my time reading it, but I'm also not really happy about it.... I feel like, I've just done a load of laundry...

This story felt like there's a ton of missing pages throughout the entire thing. Both in terms of their relationship but also in terms of the whole business/inheritance/family plot that feels like the author has written everything but then cut entire segments out every 10 pages of the final story, so you're left with a very shallow end product.

I quite like complicated plots, but there was too many supposedly complicated characters and plots that were never actually shown. There's no reason to make every character uniquely complicated with very complicated connections, if you're not going to dive into it and show us how, they got there.

I don't know much about business, but for it to be a plot that's interesting to read about, I feel like you need to actually show us the work that's put into it and not just tell us in long sentences about what needs to be done and then skip to now it's done.... That's not interesting at all.

It's not a horrible story at all, but it isn't really good either which is a shame because it had sooo much potential. I want to read this story! just in a better version...

Enough ranting from me. I'm probably going to leave this un-rated, because I just don't know...

What kind of mushroom is that?.....

This story was so mediocre, I can't even hate it, because I've already forgotten most of it. I really wanted to like it since we/I need more stories about more dom/power bottoms and submissive tops as well as more stories about switch/vers couples but this wasn't it... sorry...