I find myself scrolling past all the sex....
I really want to love this story. I like the premise, I like the character concepts, I like the art, but at 40 chapters you need to either make it smut galore with different things or give me some actual story.
I feel like the same sex in every damn chapter is too much. I don't usually mind a lot of smut, but it's getting utterly boring to me. I want to read their story! but I feel like the longer this gets the more boring it becomes. It's not bad just meh...
It feels like they’re forcing the author to keep writing it at this point lol
I'm going to go read a chapter of "Our sunny days" now - I need healing!
I've read much worse stories than this, with much shittier characters than this, but somehow this is kind of pissing me of more. I'm too damn curious to just drop it, and that pisses me off... Like what is this?
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This story is so wholesome, I have apparently lost my fucking mind!
I vote we set up this blond douche bully with the uggo drinking bully from the trip - let those two alphas fuck each other up and leave everybody else alone...
I am utterly perplexed by my own mental fortitude to have made it through 36 chapters of this.... I almost feel proud. Like I've somehow evolved my mental endurance. It's either that or I'm going insane, because this is soooo bad...
I'm sorry, but I don't get the enthusiasm for this one. To me it was very mid. I'm not mad, I spend my time reading it, but I'm also not really happy about it.... I feel like, I've just done a load of laundry...
Yeahh, they're moving wayyyy too fast
This story felt like there's a ton of missing pages throughout the entire thing. Both in terms of their relationship but also in terms of the whole business/inheritance/family plot that feels like the author has written everything but then cut entire segments out every 10 pages of the final story, so you're left with a very shallow end product.
I quite like complicated plots, but there was too many supposedly complicated characters and plots that were never actually shown. There's no reason to make every character uniquely complicated with very complicated connections, if you're not going to dive into it and show us how, they got there.
I don't know much about business, but for it to be a plot that's interesting to read about, I feel like you need to actually show us the work that's put into it and not just tell us in long sentences about what needs to be done and then skip to now it's done.... That's not interesting at all.
It's not a horrible story at all, but it isn't really good either which is a shame because it had sooo much potential. I want to read this story! just in a better version...
Enough ranting from me. I'm probably going to leave this un-rated, because I just don't know...
yes!! complicated≠good ☹ there's def a line between being complex or being convoluted
Who the hell is out here rating this over 9 - It is so hilariously bad, I can't stop laughing.
Non consensual BREATH play, face slap, and no prep as the first thing! - and that's supposed to be BDSM??? sure bro
I mean to be fair, I'd think it was bad even if there was consent, cause holy hell the writing is bad....
do tell me why you're reading it even tho it's so bad, I would love to know.
I wont know, if it's bad or not, if I don't read it, and I think you should give things a fair chance, so reading 10 chapters in one go to see, seems fair. Enjoy your reading :)
wydm I've been here since the first chapter came out
Non consensual when? Once they enter the play there is no such thing as non consensual, that's why they have a safeword, if one of them wants to stop he says the word and it's all over. Once the play starts everything is allowed unless they pacted not to do something, but honestly this is normal BDSM and consent is given once they start the play, in this case the moment they came up with the safeword.
When I wrote you, I didn't mean you specifically, I meant people in general, sorry that wasn't clear :)
tell me you're vanilla without telling me you're vanilla. Did you even read this for real or were you just looking for something to complain about? You do realize that the bottom reached out and pestered the top despite what he wrote on his dating profile, right? he insisted on multiple times that he likes doing more eventho the top's perfectly fine with just them hanging out, and he begged (literally on his knees) to do him after the top learned that he's a virgin and was about to leave. Also you seem to be forgetting that the bottom, first of all is a self-aware masochist, that "non-consensual" treatment was something that he's already familiar with, just not on a practical level, otherwise why would he, again initiate and insist for them to continue with it if it's such a bad experience for him. I agree the writing's not a masterpiece but this one is infinitely better than like 85% of trash BLs nowadays. Also consensual non-consent is like one of the most basic things in bdsm, if the author's really into that kink and if they're brave enough, it could defo go even harder and worse, but then again the likes of you might just end up clutching your pearls lol.
I'm not sure, if you're just really misinformed, or if you're actually being serious, because what you're saying here is terrifyingly wrong! In BDSM or D/S nothing is allowed unless, you've already talked about it beforehand. If everything is allowed, that is something you need to agree on specifically, before you start anything. "Can I cut you with knifes? Can I punch you in your face? Can I choke you until you pass out? Are you into scat? golden showers?
A safeword means absolutely nothing if the damage is already done. Also you can't even say the safeword, if you're gagged or being choked so it's useless. Please don't think this is how it's supposed to be, because people can get really hurt.
Even if a safeword was enough, the first time they do anything in his room, there is no agreement and no safeword - and he even does breath play....
lol the fact that he specifically said on his profile that he's a dom looking for a sub and the bottom literally asked him if he already found one and practically implied to take him in if not, was already a form of understanding between two parties, when he said he wanted to do him, there was already implication there that the other party is someone who caters to the same type of fetish, it's not a normal sex that they're after. Also the top stopped did he not? and he acknowledged his fault immediately + took how the bottom felt about it, even stopping altogether coz the MC already reached his climax anyway. So wtf are you even buzzin about here?
What did you even read? There was an agreement, the bottom here begged for the guy to play with him, he said he wants to try everything, they talked about it in previous chapters. They came up with the safeword just before they started the play, there is nothing happening in that room that has been non consensual. And you really are trying to prove an unexisting point cause there is no gag play here, if it happened they would come up with another way to make you know they want to stop. You try to be dramatic over nothing cause you did not read properly but sure, whatever you say.
If I come across like that in my comment, I guess, I have to work on that. Imagining myself clutching some pearls made me laugh though :)
The BDSM is in no way the problem, nor is the intensity or how hard it goes, in fact I started reading it, because I wanted to read a good kink story. There are quite a lot of really good kink stories out there that deserve a high rating, but this isn't it in my opinion.
The writing is poor and the way it portrays itself as being serious BDSM and D/s is laughably bad compared to others...
they didn't get the high rating coz assuming that they're your type of works, they're probably some boring ass vanilla shiz with a top who's green or puppy but is really just a flat manic pixie dream boy with a bottom who's idea of a kink is doing a cowgirl with handcuffs lmao. BDSM is intense and this work (at least for me) captures that well, not perfectly, but well enough to be a viable representation of how it should be in general.