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One, i like that he fails,it's good that he isn't instantly genius and can't predict everyone's thoughts , movements and predict the additional variables. It made this realistic and challenging- HOWEVER,the amount of loops here is too much lmao, can't he fail without needing to die and START OVER REPEATEDLY? its fine if he dies imo, but the amount of loop made the story STAGNANT. You all get me? it made the story unable to progress cause it keeps going on starting point!!!
MC CAN FAIL WITHOUT RETURNING TO LITERALLY FROM THE START!? the whole story literally can't move on and remains dormant