beta
i like that this story of her bringing more and more people around her that like her so much makes sense with her literally being a siren, just her presence and eyes can bring people in otherwise this would seem like your average harem fantasy villainess story where she picks the most powerful one and strings along the others. the building up is taking too long for my liking and there is too many tangled points, like how sewer rat was barely relevant and his whole underground thing was never even shown. why isnt aria doing anything to stop veronica? lloyd knows the future now too, just kill that bitch. i dont get it. tldr too long personally i can no longer take the slow build