i mean, aside from the first story about the first couple's college days, everything was good.
I just can't get over the first story. I know they worked it out in the end and this has way better communication than half of BL stories that I've read but I just can't get over that one panel.
Imagine trying to be intimate with your lover. You're both in a vulnerable state. And then somebody calls, and he decides to stop it in the middle and prioritise the call instead? If it was me, that would have made me feel the most awful and questioning my worth. I'd have appreciated the story more without that particular scene. Or they could have talked about it more? Like if the uke was not particularly up to it, then he should've said so. And not end it with a sex scene where it feels like the uke is just accepting it because he feels bad for the seme. It would have been better if the dialogue could have been more where the uke was telling the seme that he actually missed him during those days the seme was.not around and can't wait for tomorrow or something.
story was all over the place. I was hoping for some redeeming quality from the seme. but he was still just a manipulative jerk from start to finish. Even his friends were jerks. The way they treated him in the earlier chapters was not really explained well. All I got from this story was that uke was such a naive clueless idiot but cute and that the seme has been obsessed with him ever since.
Sooooo seme? probs in love with uke?'s bro. Then sees the older bro in him which is creepy af even if they're not related. Still creepy even if seme wasn't in love with his bro. I mean, based on his discussion with his friend architect, he has known uke was in love him for a long time. But he still goes to see him every year. It really is selfish of him to use uke just because he misses his only family? or is it just to satisfy his own guilt that he survived while his bro died? or because he actually enjoyed knowing the uke was in love with him? And to actually make uke work for him? knowing how he feels? and how he doesn't want any relationship with him or is reluctant to??? There are other ways of protecting him other than making him suffer more by being with him.
Ugh. I never really liked him even in that other story with the architect.
But I'll read through this since the uke is such a precious gem and I want see him have a happy ending.
*uke's dad
Agree, It seems to me that Naru purposely strings Mei along all the past years. He has feeling for him but doesn't to fully commit for some reasons. That's so shitty.
It's all the miscommunication trope again. But still, the guy did fall the down the stairs and had serious enough trauma in the head to make him lose memories. And yet all the other guy did was wallow in his self pity and focused only on his own misery and not the fact that the other guy is so in love with him, he still fell in love with him a second time. Also all I heard was the seme apologising because he dared to forget about their relationship ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Genuinely, r we reading the same thing? Did you read with no comprehension? Honestly if we were in his perspective, after being disowned bcs of him being gay and seeing that his lover might be interested at the thoughts of having kids, knowing that you can't give what he wanted because of you both being a same sex couple is tough. Mentioning again the trauma he has being disowned by his parents (heavily implied that he was disowned for being gay). Yeah, the other guy is in love with him and he clearly knows that, but he wanted to give him the life he assumed he wanted. A better life (meaning a life with a family he can't give). He took the chance of making the ml disregard his presence when he lost his memories, it was honestly a more selfless thing to do rather than selfish as he remembers and ml does not. Ml is apologizing for 'making him suffer' and even if he wasn't the direct cause or even the entire cause, Mc was suffering all on his own still. They didn't miscommunicate, they communicate really well. It's just that there are times trauma acts up which causes a person to lash out which is what caused the incident, they didn't miscommunicate.
Awww now why'd you go and attack me like that?
You know, just because we have different opinions and perspectives doesn't give you any right to attack me personally.
I mean, if you think there was nothing wrong with what he did, then that's your opinion. And I'm not forcing you to agree with me, am I? :)
It's not even a perspective at this point, it's the literal whole point of the story. Do not aww me please, it's genuinely cringe.
Share your opinion when you don't have fujoshi on your user, thanks!
Lol, now you're telling me what to do?
its cute ;)
If you think that's hot or cool or shit... Ew... And at least use the proper "it's"
Don't mind these kind of peeps, they're only probably into bs more than plot. A lot of fujoshis nowadays are like that. Skipping the main point of the plot or something for the smut.
Yeah, I know. I was just in the mood to mess with them. But then they wouldn't even give me some valid arguments and I got bored. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
They're certainly weren't talking to you¯_(ツ)_/¯
oh, how embarrassing. well, okay then. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
u're dumb girl, seems like you just skim the story not actually comprehending both the plot and the characters, I PITY YOU
You summarised my thought,
Some people need to better attention span with a little bit of critical thinking ( even common sense will do )
You summarised my thought,
Some people need to better attention span with a little bit of critical thinking ( even common sense will do )
You summarised my thought,
Some people need to better attention span with a little bit of critical thinking ( even common sense will do )
sorry I meant to dislike <3
Both are really at fault here and both are playing victims of their own foolishness. They both lied and took advantage of each other. Now they can't take the consequences of their actions and blame each other because now they have to face the truth. ugh
Can someone please spoil me if the story gets better?
Finally, someone is understanding the story.
Fr and why can't the seme keep his hands ti himself for once like skip the snu snu for now you gotta talk first
This is just too cute, wholesome and adorable.