
hajin cries that taehyun doesn’t communicate with him but hajin NEVER even fukin presses him to share. be never points out his eye bags and says he’s worried. he never persists until taehyun tells him how he feels. he just asks once and then moves along. second he’s strong asf and so him breaking up with doekyoung instead of just fighting jaehyuk or whatever is truly the most idiotic thing i’ve ever seen. he’s acting as if jaehyuk is a vampire or has some big power shit over him. no. he fukin doesn’t. he’s human and has absolutely nothing over hajins head. third i genuienly feel SOOOOO sad for taehyun who seems to have been struggling from beginning to end. i felt so bad for him the entire webtoon as his pain was so evident yet not one person cared enough to truly check up on him. i also hate how cute hajin is because it makes it hard to hate him but nontheless i still do. only decent characters are taehyun and his potential lover the burgundy hair dude and doekyung and hajins brother… basically everyone except hajin and the annoying brat jaehyuk. also i wish we got a bit more of taehyuns love story cuz wtf? we saw him suffer the entire webtoon and his story is still unresolved? also everyone in this webtoon absolutely sucks at communicating. lastly, the plot between hajin and his brother was sooooo freakin long almost ridiculously long. and we didn’t even get to see hajins brother deal with his feelings for the pink haired dude. all in all this webtoon had people talking so much but not actually saying anything. it could’ve been written better imo

genuienly the worst story i’ve read. i cant believe the story ended and hamin is STILL being bullied by this dude. not once, ONCE did sehyuk ever listen to him and it honestly is really disgusting. there was absolutely zero character development for sehyuk and i genuienly think this is the worst shit i’ve ever read 0/10

I dont think sehyuk needed character development, throughout the whole story he had to be one of the most well rounded support characters. He's patient, calculating, and above anything he knows what he wants. The story is more about hamin not running away from his "gangster" family, but learning to accept it, and also finding a little more confidence in himself.
Which why it is so disappointing that author made it so rapey at the end. Like why???

harper ain’t do shit. never apologized or actually realized the consequences of his actions. why did achilles have to be the one to apologize and go to him in the end when he had done so many things for harper. and i don’t wanna hear that “he led harper on multiple times” bullshit because harper READ HIS MIND AND KNEW ABOUT HIS LOVER AND PAST SO its not like he was over here thinking achilles didn’t like him. he clearly knew achilles liked him but was struggling with his memories yet harper decided to get mad and act like he didn’t know that achilles liked him smh. also, multiple times in the story there is an emphasis on achilles heel and him feeling pain through that heel…. why the heck was this not addressed. we spent dang near he entire story on harpers stupid wrist he injured from a simple trip yet achilles HEEL, arguably the most symbolic piece, was ignored lol. all in all, it was aight
definitely one of the BEST MCs i’ve ever read. his sense of awareness?? the way he recognizes others facial expression, feelings, and intentions is AMAZING and nothing you’d ever find these days. usually the MC is naive or just plain blind but he recognizes things so easily and i love having an aware MC. also the way his best friend ended up not being evil??? TEN OUT OF TEN. i’m traumatized from other webtoons and thought the best friend was going to be evil and try to break them up etc but no… he didn’t.. they actually TALKED things out and MC set himself clear boundaries and the bestfriend agreed like WOW!!! genuienly love the characters, they’re VERY realistic. only thing i hated was chapters 20-30 cuz wtf lmfao. we just got ten chapters recapping the entire story but from the gangsters pov and it was really unnecessary and i skipped them all lol