Amazing Rumor
I didn't understand what was going on in the first chapter of this webtoon. The kid who lost his parents is wandering around with his friends, and then it switches to a guy chasing after a man, but ends up with his head cut off. The translation got really weird at that point, with people talking about territory and all sorts of weird panicky stuff when they found his body. I don't know if it was a bad translation or if it was the original Korean which made no sense that affected the English lines. Hopefully the next chapter will make more sense. The art is not bad, but still pretty average for a shounen webtoon.
Update: Second chapter doesn't really make much sense either, still talking about territory and counters, and the male lead has a dream about an old lady, then he meets some bullies. What is this storytelling? It doesn't stop to explain anything, and assumes the reader can follow it. Too fast-paced and fails to set up an understandable plot right from the beginning.
Nam Goong Sae Ga Prince
Way too much crap happens in the first chapter, which is divided into two parts. In the first half, he returns home, which seems innocent enough. But oh my god, you'd never guess that he returned from some weird world that has two moons and time flows differently, where he actually spent 15 years and befriended a prince and so much other stuff which is just dumped on readers in the second half. He comes back and he looks like he hasn't gone through all that at all, so I'm not buying his fantastical story. Even his appearance hasn't changed a bit. Shouldn't he look older if he spent 15 years in real time, or is this some magic BS? And he could return to his original world at will? Because it took a mysterious explosion to get him to the world with two moons in the first place. Nothing makes sense so far. The art is average for a webtoon. Maybe this will get better as more chapters are released to explain his experiences, but so far I'm not buying what you're selling.
Evolution Webtoon
Boohoo, I wanted to know what was in the box! It's too bad this was dropped, I see the raws have almost 100 chapters. The art is simplistic but effective to communicate a sense of foreboding. The glasses wearing male character is a complete jerk, and I won't be surprised if he opened the box and died in the end. I wish this would get picked up by someone.
21st Century Journey to the West