
The beginning of the story kinda irked me a little bit. I really liked the introduction and thought it would be kinda like a comedy about a guy falling in love with his one night stand but it ended up being much more of a psychological mind fuck. I really didn’t like how the bottom would just randomly hit hojin for literally no reason at all. And that one time they fought he beat him to a pulp and hojin APOLOGIZED for it?? like what the hell.. I saw in another comment that someone said that hojin was a doormat and I completely agree. I’m aware that hojin is a supposed “kind person” but for once I wanted to see him stand up for himself. I love the dominant bottom more than anything but it mostly felt like abuse in this story because the bottom would non stop just raise his hand at hojin. I feel like this manwha tried really hard to be funny and serious at the same time but didn’t do a great job of balancing it. One moment the bottom would go through a psychological break and beat up everyone around him, and then the next moment him and hojin are cracking jokes like it doesn’t really make sense. I know he has mood swings but in retrospect it doesn’t make sense story wise either. I have mixed feelings about this honestly. It wasn’t awful but it wasn’t as good as I hoped it to be either. I actually really love the character designs and how they act. it’s just odd how toxic their relationship actually is. I just don’t understand why it’s normalized to beat the shit out of your lover / literally manipulate and control them..but then turn around and act like nothing ever happened. would I ever read this again? probably not. Was it the worst thing I’ve read? no, i think the plot was well thought out it’s just i find it odd to normalize hitting your partner and leaving BRUISES on them. the ending was alright but i kinda felt detached from the characters once things started getting ugly. the omegaverse plot just pissed me off even more

Honestly this story was a waste of my time. I was really hopeful that this would be different because the beginning really hooked me and I was interested in how the plot would unfold. But i was utterly disappointed in the end. For one after they banged once, thats all they did in the story. we never saw anything else then them banging, their family beating them up, and back to banging. they brushed over serious topics like when the bottom got literally SA’d but did nothing to address it or talk about it and just banged again to “overwrite it”. It’s fine if the author wants to add sensitive topics but they have to address it correctly. Drawing that many scenes and basically sexualizing it was revolting and so difficult to read. They didn’t even need to show what was happening to him people could’ve just inferred..but no they had to have like 10,000 scenes of it, like what the actual fuck.. It was genuinely annoying trying to finish the story to get some form of satisfaction but it was so bland and dry. The baby at the end doesn’t even make sense because the bottom couldn’t get pregnant for the longest time and now suddenly there’s a baby in the story. The entire story was just sex and had no dimension at all. Not the mention half of the side characters didn’t even matter in the story at all. They played one part then was cut and never seen again. To be fair I did like the second couple but the only think that bothered me was how twinkish the friend looked with his partner, that may be a preference issue with me but I didn’t think they were that bad. they were kinda flat too but i digress. The only good thing I can say about this story is the art is amazing to look at but the characters and the story itself is really disappointing i would never read this again bro

Honestly yeah I was hopefully about the dominate omega x recessive alpha trope but after I got to the part of him finding out he was actually recessive omega not dominant just made me lose all interest. It big waste of my time and I am really pissed I spent 2 hours of my life here lol I speed through the rest of the story

Ngl the ending was so buns bro. I really loved the beginning of the story portraying someone who was weak getting stronger and wanting to protect his loved ones. But when he decided to go back in time and like change everything without anyone dying I feel like that was a weird route to take with the story. I just didn’t really like the domestic life kinda ending it was really plain for an action packed story like this one. Not to mention I feel like the romance in this story was super unnecessary. Not a bad story but just not a great ending.

The beginning of the story was really good and had me really invested. But honestly the falling action and resolution were really bittersweet. I think the author completely forgot about the other love interests (excluding the brothers) like we never got an explanation or insight to the princes feelings. Not to mention if it was an otome game there should’ve been more characters that were shown for boyfriend options. I don’t mind the endgame couple I just really wish they added more to the relationship part of the story. Also I wish they didn’t rush the ending. I feel like mc’s feelings came out of nowhere at the end because the author wanted the story to end. Overall it was alright I just really wish they improved how the relationships were portrayed. Ngl I was rooting for the prince but eh

It was aight, like the plot of the main story was good, I just felt like it was really drawn out and had a lot of unnecessary side plots. I just couldn’t force myself to enjoy it.
Not to mention the side couple is just complete garbage. I’m aware they are showcasing an unstable relationship but there just isn’t anything good about them at all they are both just completely unlikeable characters. And I feel so much sympathy for the manager just because this pink whore decided to go back to his stepbrother..like good god. It was blatantly obvious that your parents didn’t love you.

I’m legit not finishing this because I already hate both of the characters. Like the mc pisses me off because he’s a little bitch and the ML pisses me off because he’s a narcissistic groomer, like i need them to actually get a personality and not just be obsessed with each other all the time. I can’t even like the story because of how irritating these characters are. I was interesting it in the beginning but then it was LITERALLY A GROMMER SITUATION LIKE THIS GUY WAS BARELY 5 WHEN HE BECAME THE MAIN LEADS DISCIPLE AND NOW U WANNA BANG HIM??!? Not to mention the ML is like bi-polar and changes moods every 10 seconds. I was really hoping this was good because of the art but it’s just another dumb fucking possessive main lead and a little pussy main character. Fuck ts
wow this was outstanding. The story hooked me from the beginning and I couldn’t put it down for hours. I was on edge the entire time and the way the story was writing was amazing. It was so good it even had an effect on my mood.
Sasya kinda pissed me off sometimes but I think that was due to his traumatic upbringing and his mental issues which are understanding. But on a deeper level he had to go through a lot. Of course not huge compared to karel and being in the war, but his life wasn’t easy. His family was murdered, he fled the country and people all around him kept sexualizing / objectifying him. So hes not gonna be super trusting of karel in the first place. He’s constantly being objectified by people so of course he’s gonna be scared by this sudden act of love. Yall need to stop hating on him, he had to do what he did to survive. And yes he left karel but that was because he thought he wasn’t deserving of his love.
Karel was so interesting I was trying so hard to figure him out and what he’d been through. Although I do think some of the things he did were definitely manipulative, but he’s been a little crazy since the beginning. I like how he was never too crazy though. A few gray areas here and there but it was never outrageous.
I did enjoy this story a lot but I feel like the baby didn’t play much part in it even though they tried to make it seem that way. Even in the end they never really mentioned him only like once which I found odd. Nevertheless I adore angsty stories with intricate details and story lines. This was so good, amazing art aswell (although I prefer the beginning artstyle instead of the end) but yes so beautiful.
(I was so scared it was gonna become like toxic toxic but I’m so glad it didn’t)