5amregret's Topics (76)

same omg

I disagree with your comment. I feel like we have a right to criticize bad writing when we see it. Sure we read from an illegal site but that doesn't me we can't express our disagreements. Let's take for example Naruto. The author of Naruto was horribly bad at writing women and was later called out for it AFTER the series ended where he apologised and agreed to not writing his female character in depth. This author is the same. The author is just using the female lead for fan service and she serves no purpose to his journey of revenge. What does her coming into the picture solve? Nothing. If she wasnt there then the main lead would still kill everyone. She serves no legitimate point in his story.

She makes it harder for him because he is trying to save her. I dont see the reason for a side of romance in a revenge story. It feels forced, like the author was forced by his editors to add a female damsel in distress. I dont like the side romance but that doesn't mean I dont like the revenge story. The author took their time learning so many key thing when involved in the male leads training like all these martial arts with different origins but they cant take their time to write a decent female lead who isnt a complete idiot. BULLSHIT. This story has flaws and ignoring all the bad parts in a story is not good.

AND NOW WE A FUCKING LOVE TRAINGLE. for fuck sakes. I love the murder and torture and psychological aspects nd the revenge story and male lead but the fucking girls are not it. The author did everything right but not those girls.

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Absolutely agreed, I know the female representation is shit, but it’s ALL ANYONE TALKS ABOUT. Like naruto sucked at writing women, but everyone still talks about the manga/ enjoys it despite that. On this manga tho, 80% of the comments are about the girls, it’s just kinda ridiculous.

I see your point and it is completely valid. I originally read your comment as dont complain that the representation of women sucks so I'm glad that you clarified. It does get annoying when all people talk about are the weak points in the manga and the girls but I feel like that's because we are all expressing our disappointment. The only "well wriiten" female lead in the manga is the mastermind to the ML dead parents. I just feel like the author could have done more and when we see those cringy scenes with the girls it gets most of us annoyed like when we saw Sakura in naruto being annoying and is now being referred to as trash. Hopefully it passes but I highly doubt it because from the looks of things the ML will have to save the twin girl from the guy that's obsessed with her and the twin girl will be completely useless just like the FL.

I think most people comment on the bad writing of women in this story because most of the disappointing and cringy parts involve the female characters that were introduced. Karen, the girl who died a few chapters ago, despite not being the best-written character, no one really complained about her because her situation fit the tone and genre of the story and it didn't feel out of place. When it comes to the black haired girl, on the other hand, her whole thing is to be the romantic partner and the execution on the romantic subplot is one of the main things that falls flat in this manga, which is why it's unavoidable that people will complain about her. But I do agree that there are other things in this manga that can be criticized because yes, the female characters are horribly written but the antagonists on this story (except for the main boss) are also very one-dimensional.