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At this point, i still have no idea why Lorkan is so obsessed with Ian in the present timeline. Ik that it's probably gonna be explained later on but that won't really justify his present-day actions for me, I just don't get the trope of going after your sibling's love interest. (Also, the backstory's pacing is not the best)
Third parties are so common in BL, but does the 3rd person have to be the sibling? I also can't just say that this is sibling rivalry cause, objectively, that's kinda weird, no? I'm an only child so i dont get a lotta these sibling tingz.