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To be completely honest, the start really had me at the the edge of my seat. I think the art was better at the start, the reaction of their faces was so much better before than what we have now, but still, I paid for every chapters of this because I really love the premise of Haejin running away after being hurt.
I think we deserve a different route than when Hwan caught Haejin, maybe a few years time skip, where Haejin is raising the kids alone, then Hwan is going to see them and cry. A time skip is going to give Hwan a reasonable time for his character development.
Speaking in a writers point of view, the whole story after he caught Haejin was kinda rough.
Anyway, just my honest opinion. Byeee.