That whole body throw at chapter 7 is so funny looking what was Benjamin hoping to achieve LMAO. Then, LMAO HOW CAN YOU RIP OPEN SOMEONE WITH JUST YOUR HANDS LMAOOO that scene was so unrealistic wtffff (im talking bout when ml was boutta kill Benjamin).
Ps. yeah this is bad i think he'll develop Stockholm syndrome and we won't get a happy ending where he runs away.
This was so bad i just dissociated whilst reading it... bro idek I'm not even mad I'm just sad this shit is romanticised you know... man what the hell, why... like if you wanna portray rape, just like any other dark theme, DON'T make it look like it's cute or pretty or anything like that... come on... do these authors, as grown ass women, still believe that a man can't be SAed? Do they think this is hot? Cute? What the fuck do you even think. Actually, do you even think? But, I'd also like to add, most stories on here are full of rape, this is just the most explicit one, on that regard.
I read it just cuz everyone was saying not to do it. And LMAOOOO this shit is so dumb, like the author herself said in the note, i fr can't believe this made it out in the world. Now, was it DISGUSTING. And UNNECESSARY. Lmaoooo and the art was so good too, such a pity. Still,I read it till the end, just to hate it better. Whatever, this is one of those things you read out of curiosity, regret, and never ever forget. I'll say though, I've seen worse.(⌒▽⌒)
Redemption arc COULD'VE worked if they had made him... more tame. Because the amount of rape and mental abuse he inflicted to Dan was too much... like one thing would've been for him to be a little bit of a sadist, a bit mean, a bit of a bastard or whatever, like uhm fine, not forgivable but also not unforgivable... but the author greatly exaggerated... like she made it... too much... It's too much to have a redemption arc over, too much to be forgiven and forgotten and it's also TOO unrealistic. I'm not saying other bls are realistic, but come on now, an abuser like him falling in love??? And changing??? Too much of a stretch. Idk.
Cuz I was thinking that I NEED to see this story completed at ALL costs... but... I'm scared of this being completed. Cuz, wow this is so corny to say but, I don't wanna lose them. Like if the story ends I end too like no way this can end and I can keep going. Like it has been part of my life fot so long it cannot disappear, you feel me? ┗( T﹏T )┛
so cringe