
It feels like the characters are talking independently of each other.
i.e: "Whats your name?"
Response: In the grand scheme of things, he's a great dancer and he's a great painter and I'll keep repeating that until you wonder if you're the one who's confused for no reason.
There's no flow. Overall, it's frustratingly confusing.

I've never met anyone as rude as the people who show up to orgies without business cards like, what exactly were you planning to do here? How can you show up to a hot date for group sex and forget your networking devices?
Homeboys got the right idea but you can tell he's a newbie because he totally forgets to pass his cards around *before* everyone gets hot and heavy. I've got high hopes for him though.
Yoooo, that' your body reminding you not to trust a motherfucker if he doesn't get those blush marks after kissing or sex. You know he's evil if there are no blush marks.
Extra evil points for someone who's obviously manipulative but MC's oblivious enough that those won't count until later.
hahahahahaha true af
Omg yes!! I always think that if he doesn't blush when y'all having sex and kiss, that means there ain't any love, he's bad.