- I really don’t want to be rude but the story line really is kind of messed up. I read through waiting for it to make sense, it just got way more messy. Everything’s jumbled up. It’s like bringing together various plots but not finishing any properly. I’m very sorry if my words aren’t right but it’s because I really feel like the author can do better
Ok this was a LOT cuter than I was expecting!
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