
[EDIT] This is just a constructive criticism. I don't hate the author or the characters. Istg yall can't take criticism (also, if you make a baby, take responsibility, alright kids?)
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Don't get me wrong, I really really like the art (bcs it's gorgeous) but FL is as you say, lacking(?) in a lot of ways (maybe that's why most of you are saying she is a "boring" character). She doesn't have distinct characteristics...
I'm also a bit frustrated at how she handles her situation. I understand that she's afraid and she doesn't want to get hurt, etc. but I just want her to communicate her worries properly to the ML who wants to take responsibility to her pregnancy. Not all men would do that. But then again, I understood where she's coming from, she doesn't have a healthy family background which led to her fears but I just want her to grow up(?) and take responsibility bcs she has a baby now, she can't be thinking all about herself anymore... I know, happiness of oneself is more important but if you make a child (even if accidentally, well they had sex w/o contraceptives, what dyou expect :D), you should take responsibility for it and make decisions that will be good, not only to herself, but most of all, to her baby.
Maybe that's why I find this a bit boring and frustrating, she doesn't initiate things and take responsibility - only the ML do things that should be decided by the both of them as a soon to be parents (which makes the ML look like a bit forceful and all, it's sad) but I see it as being considerate to the FL who doesn't have clear decisions for herself and her baby.
Anyhow, this is still not yet done and I'm still hoping for a character development! Will read this once it is done, I guess.
Kudos to the author tho! Support the author! (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
I really like how direct the seme is and he knows what he has to do. I love this unique characterization that we don't see much :D