
this kind of story definitely needs more chapters… pacing was way too fast!! the big fight between the two literally lasted 7 panels before they made up the constant flip flopping between extreme emotions gave me whiplash. both of the characters have a lot of baggage and insecurities that just cant be resolved properly/satisfactorily in these10 chapters. i think it shouldve focused more on the comedic bdsm aspect with the seme being thrown into the scene so suddenly
he pronounced. his name differently this cant be it i need more of them