
i really like the psychological game aspect, but sometimes i feel that the author stops raymond from thinking his plans all the way through just so we get more torture porn… it feels less that jerome and the goons are super evil geniuses and moreso that they’re just winning through plot armor
i hope raymond wins but i wont be surprised if he doesnt… just disappointed lol

the other guy lost the instant the mc got the blessing of the kid LOL
also not a big fan of age gap relationships where you can see them as kids… makes it kinda weird to see the physical maturity differences even when at the age they’re currently at, it doesnt matter. btw that is NOT a middleschooler
and im so confused on the ml he’s sooo messy… how in the world did he end up with a kid. im not being too judgy rn, im sure he has his reasons, but yea

ohhh i really liked both of them, theyre so cute,, especially sakuma,,,, but i definitely wish this was longer. id love to see sakuma’s healing journey alongside their actual romance— clearly there’s still a lot to work on (him still feeling so panicked he felt cornered into kissing the girl)
also the extra page about the dad????? wouldve been interesting to read more about that generational trauma… ahhhh there was so much left to explore
i could do without the incest tho
kang has done WAY too much to ever be forgiven… ahjin stand ur ground, dont let that bitch back in (even in ur other lives LOL)