I just couldn't follow this well. What was all the drama about? Cute art, but for me the plot fell flat. Maybe if someone spells it out for me I'll feel differently.
Ohara was afraid Kawai wasn't being serious and he thought being two guys together was a bad idea... or something like that :p
OK, I'm like you girl, I just can't.
But I read it again and I can sort of follow the narrative.
I'll try to explain....
There are two mayor events.
Bottom cried - made top feel guilty
Bottom thought he was abandoned by top (the scene with the telescope)
Now, the bottom, in his little girly mind, thought he was abandoned and decided to "give up" phrase which he keeps repeating but not really following.
It also seems to be a plot point that the bottom thinks top kun is not serious about him or his feelings (like, maybe he thinks he's not really gay?) but that even though seems very important to the bottom's actions and reactions is not really expanded upon.
The story is not really written well, the idea is good, but the boys say one thing do another don't really follow on what they are saying, specially the bottom.
It's very forced drama, that's why sometimes you just disconnect.
But anyway that's the story.
Thank you! It seemed very forced to me also. I just couldn't understand what all the hub bub was about! Glad I'm not the only one!
Nice art, if the mangaka could only come up with an actual plotime.
This manga is confusing. I gave it the benefit of the doubt for a bit, but what the actual fuck? Was that supposed to be an HEA. It wasn't.
Too much censoring. Ghost penis everywhere (⊙…⊙ )
Hahahaha!! (≧∀≦) lol, ghost penis. I'm using that term from now on.
Who you gonna call?
GHOST PENIS HAHHAHAH XD
Me too （≧∇≦）／
X'DD