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I'm sorry, but I don't understand why it has such a high rating.
I read the whole story. In my opinion, it's an empty story, just sex, the uke is bossy and the seme is useless. I've never read about such a useless seme who contributed absolutely nothing to the story. Read at your own risk :)
Cause it started out good. Then went downhill in the middle. I rated this highly at first as well and then the top just became so useless and the plot melodramatic for no reason. I like dominant bottoms and they're so rare to find, it's disappointing that this ended up the way it did. I think the couple suffered from a severe power imbalance, common sense from the top and contrived miscommunications.
I started the story long before the art went to shit, but I let it sit. I picked it up again, but seeing the changes and how the story was becoming meh, I continued it so I could finish it.
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So many plot holes, no variety in the outfits, and don't tell me it's an office story. I've read plenty of those, and you can tell they put effort into the clothes and the characters' appearance. It's not even worth rereading. I was practically desperate to finish it because I don't like leaving stories unfinished. Not recommended.