the story wasn’t too bad, i feel like it was completely rushed tho and i got the plot it just all happened way to quick even tho it was a relatively longer story
the smut scenes were good tho which makes up for what it lacks in character but it just seemed a bit empty at times
that’s was so cute but what what that ending
“i like you too” and finished, i wanted to see them actually get in a relationship, him to reveal he’s the guy from the past, etc
i liked it and i liked the backstory, the only thing i wills say is that i feel like the ending was really rushed
i saw someone say that this was a plotless story just filled with sex and, dont get me wrong, there is a whole lot of smut in this story but it’s wrong to say there’s no plot
this is the most gut wrenching, traumatic story i’ve ever read but i’m so happy he got a happy ending, it hurt so much when they showed his past to the point i teared up
my only picky point would be for like the last 20 chapters the font changed and it was a bit hard to read at points, especially when the writing was coloured red it was nearly impossible
all in all i’d rate this a solid 8/10, the storyline was beautiful and i can appreciate that which is why it’s rated highly, i only knocked points because 1. is not the biggest fan of psychological stories and 2. more than half of the chapters were pure rape scenes
honestly it’s so long winded and there’s a new side character each chapter, there’s also so much rape already and i’m not even halfway thru it’s generally so weird and not in a good way
this is so cute but it needs more i hope there’s more
i was really interested in the first couple and wanted to see more of them
honestly so cute but it’s so short, i love love love the chibi style its so cute omg
the art style change did throw me off tho
this was really cute, it wasn’t too long of a story and can be read in a few hours which i liked and the plot was really cute
whilst going down my list of stories to read i came across this one, when reading the description i wasn’t too sure if i liked the plot and i was so close to removing it from my list and not reading it but i decided to give it a chance and im so glad i did
100% recommend to anyone
there are certain stories where it feels like there has to be some sort of smut in it otherwise it’ll either be like 5 chapters or it would just be a bore
i loved this one tho, the story really didn’t need the smut (even tho i did like it (▰˘◡˘▰) ) to give it a great plot
i really likes the first couple and wasn’t a big fan of the blue haired guy (i’m shut with names) because of his past with the previous couple but, towards the end, i think i like them more than the first couple
one thing i do wish that we got to see was the blue haired guy meeting up and apologising to the first couple i think that would be nicer
lots of plot filler and honestly i feel like it could be a whole lot longer as like they were rushed into a relationship in the second episode but then i also feel like there’s lots in there that isn’t needed but i do still quite like the story and where it came to at the “end”
it does say completed but it isn’t
idrk what was going on, it has a storyline in place but also had lots of filler and towards the end just kinda drifted off
there was definitely a plot to the story and a storyline in in place but i do feel like half of the chapters were smut purely to fill the story out a bit
don’t get me wrong i enjoyed it and all but i wish there was more story to it
Honestly, I truly love this story and have been following it since a few months after it first started. I did feel like the last 10-15 chapters were a little rushed and I got a little lost at points but, with a general understanding of the plot you can grasp what's happening
I liked the fact that we were guests to the wedding at the end that was a nice touch I dont think ive ever seen before
im sad that the story has ended but im happy to have been a part of it
it seems sort of cute but tbh i didn’t really understand what was going on and i don’t think i ever will
i really liked the storyline, i did think the ending was a bit rushed but i feel like they left space for side stories
the one thing i didn’t like was that the art style changed so close to the end it threw me off and i wasn’t a big fan