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the start was really interesting, the middle was a bit meh but then the ending was nice

i was really enjoying this im so sad its not finished i thought it was

the art is pretty but it lacked personality, i feel like the backstory was there but not shown enough to truly understand the emotion behind the story

i didn’t mind the story, it was pretty much sex with very little plot (which i don’t hate but still), it just made me a bit uncomfortable with the fact the uke looked like a child and got smaller and smaller as the story went on

i wasn’t sure about this going into it but OMG it’s so cute and it’s one of my new favourites

the story wasn’t too bad, i feel like it was completely rushed tho and i got the plot it just all happened way to quick even tho it was a relatively longer story
the smut scenes were good tho which makes up for what it lacks in character but it just seemed a bit empty at times

that’s was so cute but what what that ending
“i like you too” and finished, i wanted to see them actually get in a relationship, him to reveal he’s the guy from the past, etc

i liked it and i liked the backstory, the only thing i wills say is that i feel like the ending was really rushed

i saw someone say that this was a plotless story just filled with sex and, dont get me wrong, there is a whole lot of smut in this story but it’s wrong to say there’s no plot
this is the most gut wrenching, traumatic story i’ve ever read but i’m so happy he got a happy ending, it hurt so much when they showed his past to the point i teared up
my only picky point would be for like the last 20 chapters the font changed and it was a bit hard to read at points, especially when the writing was coloured red it was nearly impossible

all in all i’d rate this a solid 8/10, the storyline was beautiful and i can appreciate that which is why it’s rated highly, i only knocked points because 1. is not the biggest fan of psychological stories and 2. more than half of the chapters were pure rape scenes

honestly it’s so long winded and there’s a new side character each chapter, there’s also so much rape already and i’m not even halfway thru it’s generally so weird and not in a good way