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i really liked the storyline, i did think the ending was a bit rushed but i feel like they left space for side stories
the one thing i didn’t like was that the art style changed so close to the end it threw me off and i wasn’t a big fan

don’t get me wrong, i really like the ending in terms of them starting there relationship, it was really cute and a nice way to end that part but then i feel like there’s so much more that could be shown, for example, the family and him getting over the misunderstanding, the semes ex said he wanted to speak to him that could’ve been another chapter
there’s so much more that could’ve come from the storyline but it just ended after they spoke again and started there relationship

no no no this can’t end - side stories please, give it to me please, rachel give it to me

i wanna see the baby ╥﹏╥

great story but the ending is a bit meh
like there is no ending it just stops

everything about this story is so cute
the assume, the plot, the seme is such a green flag and treats the uke so well i love it so much (≧∀≦)

tbh, ignoring all the obvious shitting stuff that happened, the first 2 chapters were quite good and well paced but then the last chapter just flew by like i feel like that could’ve been another 2 chapters in itself but it just wasn’t

this was so cute and pure omg i didn’t expect to love it this much i want more!!!!
the part that i love so much about omegaverse stories that always makes my heart melt is when they build a nest i love it so much ╥﹏╥

thought it was gonna be really sweet. and the. it was just,,, well… not

don’t get me wrong i sort of get the plot however i just feel like it was so rushed and it didn’t make sense towards the end
it could’ve been a really good story but the end was just rushed and it feels so incomplete

this story is actually quite cute and sweet, idk what’s going on in the random chapters about someone playing the piano but the main story is lovely