I can’t do these unnaturally paced plots. Got halfway through ch 1 before I rolled my eyes at the flow of it all. Decided to drop it at the end of the chapter. Basic ass writing, dialogue, and art. Not for me, sorry folks
Aw. It’s super cute though. I’ll take this over any toxic BL anyday.
PLEASEEEEEEE DO NOT TELL ME THIS MASTERPIECE WENT WITH THE “IT WAS ALL A DREAM” AHH ENDING BECAUSE WHAT WAS THAAAAAAT
I AM TOO INVESTED NO NO NO NO NOOOO
It’s not if you look carefully he’s in the same room as he was when he got the book he fell asleep reading the book and dreamt of coming to terms with his younger self
Gege is so lazy that he won’t even wrap it up in a proper manner… Straight up just went for the point form route in the form of dialogue for all the questions we have as readers. So disappointing.
I’m foaming at the mouth about how much I love their love
The way this is ending feels like a middle school creative writing essay, where you realize your world-building got way too big and you need to wrap it up but have no idea how. Cue “but it was all a dream…” -_-
Fr disney ahh ending
LMFAO THAT IS SO TRUE THO-
Have a snickers and collect your thoughts, dramatic ass Jin
I’m sorry but I hated the first story. I just got the ick the entire time.