And no, it wasn't low class english for me. I'd say your translation is very understandable and there's not even a need to use fancy words. I really appreciate your efforts. and you wanting to share it to the readers right away, ah, what a wonderful being hope to read the other stories you're working on too!
like fuckin HAWT. why is taker so handsome and sexy like wtf. and sooho is just so adorable. just how perfect can they get?