beta
It could have been funny but the comedy has drowned in the smut, so it was just boring.
And ugly.
And not immersive at all.
Like, I don't give a flying fck about any of the characters, I don't care about what they do or what they think and why, and I know what's happening to them, they fuck. All the freaking time they fuck and in between, the author decided that we didn't want to see them so they just fuck and voilà. Maybe they'll be fucking dor the whole 45 chapters?
I don't know if anything happens later on but I couldn't go further, it took me 3 days to read these 20 chapters just because of how uninteresting it was...