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I started reading this wheat it had 16 chapters, and it really felt like it had a clear kind of goal of two kids exploring the supernatural and whatnot kind of like a slice of life. But now, I don’t really understand what the « red string » tying all of these small stories is. Each arc a new set of characters get introduced, they have a sad backstory, they get helped, they get some character development and get added to the « gang » but then they kind of get left behind for the new introductions to the new characters. I like the characters and their story, and the lore is really interesting with the rules/explanations and it’s nice that the story has a somewhat clear coupling situation going on. I just feel like we’ve kind of lost the plot of aliens-spirits and I can’t help but wonder if the author really has a plan. Maybe a big end fight? Against aliens and spirits? I feel like that would just get boring though. What do you guys think? (=・ω・=)