i don't see any problem w/ the translation? lol its still cohesive and understandable, not to mention incredibly well done and clean. if ur looking to nitpick, please do it somewhere else, it's a privilege to even get to read this stuff for free so HUGE thank you to the uploader/s
I'M SCREAMING N CRYING. ╥﹏╥ its so good and heartwarming i'm glad it doesn't drag itself out for too long