wow such a good story! pacing was excellent up until the last 15 chapters or so. too many added twists and turns and they spent way too long in the last room going back and forth about returning to the real world. the fl started to annoy me a bit with her wishywashy-ness in those last scenes, but everything else was perfect! i loved perrat, but why this poor bb had to suffer so much ;_; i wish i could have seen more scenes of him truly happy. would have been great to seen an epilogue, but the ending was otherwise great. didn't feel too rushed.
ahhhh so cute, elissa is brave to confess to ginger like that and ginger is slowly learning to love himself and another person. i love their relationship so much and i want to see elissa's powers develop further