
i feel like there wasn't as much lead up. like. maybe it's just the way the artist draws the expressions without much nuance but that confession was so sudden. bro went from being around him for work & teasing him 3 times to being like "I AM GOING TO KISS YOU." like the adventure was adventuring, the plot was plotting, but the romance was barely romancing, how did we get here? is it different in the novel?
i feel like the author/artist is very new. the writing wasn't very good, the pacing was awful, the art is kinda wonky. reading this was like going through withdrawl with brain zaps. i didn't hate it, but i think they need a better producer/editor to give them pointers. maybe a different format would have suited it better.