I am not a great writer myself but man this was all over the place ... the premise was pretty good but the plot and characters are so inconsistent. Seems like the female characters are all bad and irredeemable but Kwando(?) is sort of redeemed but then disappeared?
I only stayed because I want her and the kiddos to get out of the situation because I can relate to it
Why is it to big and plump and juicy all up in my face
Him: smiling about his dreams
The fucking psycho: Lemme destroy those dreams real quick to get pleasure
The fuck
He absolutely deserved this. He is lucky this is someone nice. It could have gone really badly
"I'm going to fuckingbpiss myself"
"Please don't"
Please write your own comedy novel I will read it
i'll try my best AHSVHA too bad i'm actually originally an angst and tragedy author
I am actually cackling because I remembered so many people were upset with how the author was dragging the chase and misunderstanding arc.
And then "boom" THE END.... and everyone is denial
Bro got the F1 driver neck