So I wrote a scene that i'm pretty proud of and I really want to show someone but I have no one to show it soooo i'm just gonna post it here and hopefully someone tells me what they think about it.
Sorry about any mistakes~
A young boy stood still as the cold wind blew around him, his hair tangling up and his loose clothes swaying with it. The young boy was looking down at his bare feet, they were bloody and dirty, full of scratches from not wearing shoes. He slowly reached out his shaking hand in front of him, his dark emerald eyes following the movement. He grabbed onto the metal railing in front of him, exhaling a small breath he took another step forward as he let his other hand grab onto the railing. Slowly raising his head he looked at the view in front of him. Sunlight shone across the city in front of him as the sun slowly set to rest. Street and building lights had begun to start to turn on, lighting up the few dark areas. Above the busy city few white clouds drifted through the darkening sky, the wind slowly pushing them away over the mountain that stood near the city. As the boy looked over the city he could feel something watching him from behind.
A man sat a few feet behind him, leaning against the wall of the roof entrance, a lit cigarette in hand. He watched the young boy who continued to looked over the city, the man's chapped lips set in a straight line. He brought up his cigarette to his his mouth and took a big breath of smoke before exhaling it. A deep cough erupted from his chest, a few more coughs followed before it stopped. Scratching his short beard he spoke to the young boy. His voice rough and unpleasant to hear.
"Come on, do it"
The boy continued to look over the city that was slowly getting ready for night. His hands begun to shake more as he could feel the dead stare of the man behind him. The wind turned more violent, blowing cold air right onto the young boy, making goosebumps appear on his arms.
"Jump"
Hearing that word the boy swallowed hard, his grip on the railing tightened as he slowly leaned over of it. Looking straight down he saw people walking around, normal people who were going home to their families and warm houses. His eyes widened slightly at the height, his breathing started to fasten, his heart begun to start racing, slowly he leaned away from the railing.
The man watched with cold eyes as he saw the boy shakenly start to lift up his leg onto the railing. Taking another breath of the cigarette he brushed his hand through his greasy hair as he exhaled the smoke. The boy was now sitting on the railing with one of his legs over the railing in the air while the other one safely on the concrete roof. The man huffed through his nose, a noise of amusement coming from the back of his throat as the side of his mouth twitched upwards.
The young boy's grip on the railing was deadly tight, his whole body was shaking violently. Taking a breath he inched the rest of his body off the railing. He had not let his gaze be removed from the sun in front of him, the beauty of it was enticing. The bright yellow changing into a sweet golden orange, changing the sky into light blue, orange and even some parts light pink. If only he could fly, if only he could jump off, fly and never return. It was like he almost could, but he new the reality of what would happened if he jumped. Letting out a breath he slowly closed.
The man's eyes narrowed slightly as he watched the boy lift up his air-born leg and brought it back onto the roof. He watched as the boy slowly collapse onto the ground, his hands now loosely holding onto the railing and his head resting against the bars that separated him and the fall. A single word escaped the man's chapped lips and rotten teeth.
"Pathetic"
A single tear ran down the young boy's cheek.
Sorry about any mistakes~
A young boy stood still as the cold wind blew around him, his hair tangling up and his loose clothes swaying with it. The young boy was looking down at his bare feet, they were bloody and dirty, full of scratches from not wearing shoes. He slowly reached out his shaking hand in front of him, his dark emerald eyes following the movement. He grabbed onto the metal railing in front of him, exhaling a small breath he took another step forward as he let his other hand grab onto the railing. Slowly raising his head he looked at the view in front of him. Sunlight shone across the city in front of him as the sun slowly set to rest. Street and building lights had begun to start to turn on, lighting up the few dark areas. Above the busy city few white clouds drifted through the darkening sky, the wind slowly pushing them away over the mountain that stood near the city. As the boy looked over the city he could feel something watching him from behind.
A man sat a few feet behind him, leaning against the wall of the roof entrance, a lit cigarette in hand. He watched the young boy who continued to looked over the city, the man's chapped lips set in a straight line. He brought up his cigarette to his his mouth and took a big breath of smoke before exhaling it. A deep cough erupted from his chest, a few more coughs followed before it stopped. Scratching his short beard he spoke to the young boy. His voice rough and unpleasant to hear.
"Come on, do it"
The boy continued to look over the city that was slowly getting ready for night. His hands begun to shake more as he could feel the dead stare of the man behind him. The wind turned more violent, blowing cold air right onto the young boy, making goosebumps appear on his arms.
"Jump"
Hearing that word the boy swallowed hard, his grip on the railing tightened as he slowly leaned over of it. Looking straight down he saw people walking around, normal people who were going home to their families and warm houses. His eyes widened slightly at the height, his breathing started to fasten, his heart begun to start racing, slowly he leaned away from the railing.
The man watched with cold eyes as he saw the boy shakenly start to lift up his leg onto the railing. Taking another breath of the cigarette he brushed his hand through his greasy hair as he exhaled the smoke. The boy was now sitting on the railing with one of his legs over the railing in the air while the other one safely on the concrete roof. The man huffed through his nose, a noise of amusement coming from the back of his throat as the side of his mouth twitched upwards.
The young boy's grip on the railing was deadly tight, his whole body was shaking violently. Taking a breath he inched the rest of his body off the railing. He had not let his gaze be removed from the sun in front of him, the beauty of it was enticing. The bright yellow changing into a sweet golden orange, changing the sky into light blue, orange and even some parts light pink. If only he could fly, if only he could jump off, fly and never return. It was like he almost could, but he new the reality of what would happened if he jumped. Letting out a breath he slowly closed.
The man's eyes narrowed slightly as he watched the boy lift up his air-born leg and brought it back onto the roof. He watched as the boy slowly collapse onto the ground, his hands now loosely holding onto the railing and his head resting against the bars that separated him and the fall. A single word escaped the man's chapped lips and rotten teeth.
"Pathetic"
A single tear ran down the young boy's cheek.
2016-12-09 09:49 marked
I have searched for this yaoi for two entire days if anyone know it please tell me the title :)
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2016-12-07 14:07 marked
Looking for a yaoi manga. I only remember some parts of it. Long post ahead
So the seme and uke is already engaged. The uke thinks that the seme is not interested in him because they never had sex. The seme is something like a boss in a corporation, and have a secretary. So the uke ask the secretary who is a fujoshi, the way of making the seme interested in him. And so they have an idea give a food or drink with aphrodisiac to the seme. But the seme never eat any of that food or drink given. So the Secretary end up mixing the aphrodisiac with a perfume and give it to the seme, but the uke dont know about this. After that the seme give the perfume to the uke, and without knowing the uke use it before he go to work modelling. At work the uke is already so aroused and almost give a blowjob to his boss or something. And after the seme found out what happened he quickly go to the uke and take him home by car. In the car the uke is still aroused and tries to open the seme pants, so the seme ended up tied him in the back seat. And when the uke comes to his senses he think he was going to be kidnapped.
I only remember that much, the uke is crossdressing i guess.
So the seme and uke is already engaged. The uke thinks that the seme is not interested in him because they never had sex. The seme is something like a boss in a corporation, and have a secretary. So the uke ask the secretary who is a fujoshi, the way of making the seme interested in him. And so they have an idea give a food or drink with aphrodisiac to the seme. But the seme never eat any of that food or drink given. So the Secretary end up mixing the aphrodisiac with a perfume and give it to the seme, but the uke dont know about this. After that the seme give the perfume to the uke, and without knowing the uke use it before he go to work modelling. At work the uke is already so aroused and almost give a blowjob to his boss or something. And after the seme found out what happened he quickly go to the uke and take him home by car. In the car the uke is still aroused and tries to open the seme pants, so the seme ended up tied him in the back seat. And when the uke comes to his senses he think he was going to be kidnapped.
I only remember that much, the uke is crossdressing i guess.
2016-12-05 14:02 marked
I can't remember the name of this manga, but I remember in the first chapter this guy was like a spy/assassin and set this bomb up and this lady threw him a baby to save and he ends up raising this baby. The "son" ends up liking him? But romance didn't really develop between the two, he ends up dating a younger looking version of the dad.... ┗( T﹏T )┛
I honestly don't remember if it was even good or not, curiosity is just killing me right now.
I honestly don't remember if it was even good or not, curiosity is just killing me right now.
2016-12-04 16:52 marked
I hate myself for forgetting the name and I can't seem to find it again. This is a yaoi manga where the uke is afraid of thunder and the seme was in a dark room with him. They were drunk. Fast forward...so in the end the uke called the seme peevish. Please help
2016-12-02 11:23 marked
A manga popped in my mind, but I cant remember the title and I cant find it either..
it's a shoujo manga about a robot that used to be a man, he was mutilated and his missing organs were replaced with robot structures. There was this girl i think she was in deep slumber or something, when she woke up she discovered that she is living in a modern world, and she is also living together with the half robot half human guy..
This half robot half human guy has one missing eye replaced with robot eyes, his arms and legs too.. his hair is black.. that is all i remember about his features.. ╥﹏╥
anyone knows ?? Thank u
it's a shoujo manga about a robot that used to be a man, he was mutilated and his missing organs were replaced with robot structures. There was this girl i think she was in deep slumber or something, when she woke up she discovered that she is living in a modern world, and she is also living together with the half robot half human guy..
This half robot half human guy has one missing eye replaced with robot eyes, his arms and legs too.. his hair is black.. that is all i remember about his features.. ╥﹏╥
anyone knows ?? Thank u
2016-11-29 10:09 marked
hi guys please help
I'm looking for a manga or anime about a boy, who is born with a huge amount of magical power. So he can't hurt anybody, his powers have been sealed with a piercing. When he got older, he got more and more piercings to prevent his powers from breaking out...
I hope somebody can help me...
I'm looking for a manga or anime about a boy, who is born with a huge amount of magical power. So he can't hurt anybody, his powers have been sealed with a piercing. When he got older, he got more and more piercings to prevent his powers from breaking out...
I hope somebody can help me...
2016-11-28 09:31 marked
I want to re read this yaoi manga, the story goes the seme and uke have been dating for quite a long time but they haven't had sex yet. The seme tells this to his friends I think? And later the seme wants to do the uke but the uke headbumped the seme and ran away. The reason of the uke didn't have sex with the seme is because the uke worries that the seme would get turned off by seeing a male body since and then there is a small panel where the uke lifts up his shirt and the seme immediately gets hard.
I want to read this again since it's such a cute couple. The uke is older than the seme
I want to read this again since it's such a cute couple. The uke is older than the seme
2016-11-27 13:11 marked
All I remember was that the uke got turned on by pain and he had a hella lot of piercing in his ears. Thank if you find it!?!?!
2016-11-27 13:09 marked
i guys please help us
I'm looking for a manga or anime about a boy, who is born with a huge amount of magical power. So he can't hurt anybody, his powers have been sealed with a piercing. When he got older, he got more and more piercings to prevent his powers from breaking out...
I hope somebody can help me...
I'm looking for a manga or anime about a boy, who is born with a huge amount of magical power. So he can't hurt anybody, his powers have been sealed with a piercing. When he got older, he got more and more piercings to prevent his powers from breaking out...
I hope somebody can help me...
2016-11-27 08:50 marked
Looking for this manga about a guy how bully's a class mate about being gay. When they meet several years later he keeps Billy him until he gets turned on when the guy calls himself name when grouped in a taxi
2016-11-11 23:54 marked
I need help looking for a name for this manga/anime: (i might be off a little)
A girl gets adopted into this rich family. In the family, there are 3 children who each have red eyes. While they are at school, they are often bullied because of their eyes. When the adopted daughter noticed this, she attempts to stop the bullying by getting a pair of red eyes herself. She reads a book explaining how to get the red eyes. In the book, it tells her to do a few things to prepare and collect things(don't remember too well..) but also says to commit suicide to be "reborn" with the red eye, but she ended up doing something wrong or forgetting something which led to her death.
My friend told me about this last year, but I never actually looked it up and forgot what the title was. Thank you if you can help :-)
A girl gets adopted into this rich family. In the family, there are 3 children who each have red eyes. While they are at school, they are often bullied because of their eyes. When the adopted daughter noticed this, she attempts to stop the bullying by getting a pair of red eyes herself. She reads a book explaining how to get the red eyes. In the book, it tells her to do a few things to prepare and collect things(don't remember too well..) but also says to commit suicide to be "reborn" with the red eye, but she ended up doing something wrong or forgetting something which led to her death.
My friend told me about this last year, but I never actually looked it up and forgot what the title was. Thank you if you can help :-)
2016-11-09 09:41 marked
Help! I'm looking for two shounen ai/yaoi mangas:
1) Is probably part of an anthology. The leads were childhood friends and the uke would give the seme good luck kisses before any big occasion. I remember the seme's name is Gou. They grow apart but then another guy is interested in the uke and Gou becomes jealous. I think it's two chapters of a compilation.
2) The lead works in an event management company or something and the love interest takes care of the plants in the building. He can hear the voices of the plants and something happens and he loses the ability/memory of his time with the lead.
Please help me find these two! Thank you in advance!
1) Is probably part of an anthology. The leads were childhood friends and the uke would give the seme good luck kisses before any big occasion. I remember the seme's name is Gou. They grow apart but then another guy is interested in the uke and Gou becomes jealous. I think it's two chapters of a compilation.
2) The lead works in an event management company or something and the love interest takes care of the plants in the building. He can hear the voices of the plants and something happens and he loses the ability/memory of his time with the lead.
Please help me find these two! Thank you in advance!
2016-11-03 18:43 marked
does anyone know a yaoi manga that has a seme with an innocent or childlike personality? ouo
2016-11-02 22:42 marked
1. Yaoi manga where there's a misunderstanding between a salesman and pharmacist(?) and they had sex at an onsen
2. Yaoi manga where there's a relationship between the company's president son and a very capable other man. They seem like rivals but are actually going out.
2. Yaoi manga where there's a relationship between the company's president son and a very capable other man. They seem like rivals but are actually going out.
2016-11-02 05:26 marked
Yaoi: seme is uke's brother's friend. He is dared to by his friends to seduce the uke
2016-11-02 05:25 marked
can someone tell me the name of this manga
Its about two seme who fell in love with one uke they are childhood friends that goes to the same college and as well as they are fighting for the uke then ended up getting together
Sorry for the jumbled up info its all I can remember about this manga
Its about two seme who fell in love with one uke they are childhood friends that goes to the same college and as well as they are fighting for the uke then ended up getting together
Sorry for the jumbled up info its all I can remember about this manga
2016-11-02 05:25 marked
So I wrote a scene that i'm pretty proud of and I really want to show someo...