
There's not just the weird love triangle, this whole story is harem vibes with "the one who got away". So annoying. Is his future ex wife constantly here to remind us he liked that kind of nonsense before and now he's fighting himself to not like her and/or be a trash human being?? Idk. Not really melodramatic not really acting/entertainment focused. A chaotic mix. And this man's jaw line gets thicker in every chapter. One page he looks like a completely different person??! Sigh

The art is alright but damn, as an actual introvert I would actually get turned off if my partners were this chatty. I like my peace and quiet. And the fact that the chatter is all about them one upping each other? Hell the fuck no. They intoxicate her and grape her. Bruh, she's dickmatized. Girl needs other poly adjacent peeps to know this shit ain't it. I understand the thirst is real but I can't believe any romantic chemistry is here. The story should have ended more firmly in the "wow I do love getting dicked" or "damn, I have a great fuckbuddies setup".

Why are ppl saying it's a big age gap? Tilly is 4-5 years old when Loina was born. Yan is around Tilly's age. 4-6 years older AND he has only confessed his feelings (when Loina is 16). They have not entered a relationship. Have y'all been reading the same fictional fantasy mangas? This has better consent and age range than most?!
Even if this is slower pace, it's nice seeing devoted MC/ML with important family and friends relationships. A second couple where the could have been 2nd ML doesn't take MC's sister as a substitute. And they're all good looking, there isn't that weird sacrifice of genetics where only the MC and her love interest are handsome. Older characters actually have wrinkles, etc. These subtle details make it worth reading.
Is this AI? Both main characters face and bodies are different shapes and sizes every chapter. A lot of the time, MC eyes are misaligned. It's like it should be the same art and character but it's just different enough that it doesn't look right.
I went back to check. The first chapter, every panel featuring MCs chest is a different size and shape. The MLs fingers (child holding bookbin second chapter first ish page), one hand is pale the other tan. They're two different sizes (like fat fingers vs skinny ones). Theres extra lines and weird proportions on faces, shoulder sizes, everything. What the fuck is this
Nah i think this artist is just someone who just flipping sucks at anatomy and is making it more unrealistic as it gets more smutty