
I agree with what everyone is saying but.. idk why but this story actually stayed with me a few days. Usually I'd just forget a random bl but this one kept popping up in my head. I think it's because the story had such potential and the art is gorgeous (honestly one of the hottest tops I've seen..). I'm not sure why the author had to rush it so much, because if they didn't and really explored more of the dungeons and relationship between them then this could have been something really great.

I don't mind the artstyle, but what I do mind is that the seme is so bland-psycho if that makes any sense? Like he hasn't shown that he has any other traits than being just crazy obsessed. Give me at least some intriguing intelligent masterplan-making psycho if you're gonna go that route, or a tortured backstory that made him crazy. He needs some more nuance to make him interesting
Raynall Horn Penny Ceasar??? Is that how european names sound to asians? lmao it's just random words thrown together