
I agree with what everyone is saying but.. idk why but this story actually stayed with me a few days. Usually I'd just forget a random bl but this one kept popping up in my head. I think it's because the story had such potential and the art is gorgeous (honestly one of the hottest tops I've seen..). I'm not sure why the author had to rush it so much, because if they didn't and really explored more of the dungeons and relationship between them then this could have been something really great.

I don't mind the artstyle, but what I do mind is that the seme is so bland-psycho if that makes any sense? Like he hasn't shown that he has any other traits than being just crazy obsessed. Give me at least some intriguing intelligent masterplan-making psycho if you're gonna go that route, or a tortured backstory that made him crazy. He needs some more nuance to make him interesting
It's kinda hot but also bit fucked up.. Would have been wayyy hotter tho if they gave the black haired guy at least some hint of attraction towards white hair guy. That last scene would have been better if not so rapey..
You can't really say that it's rapey cus they made a deal and the black haired guy had a choice to not meet with him. I think it's his own fault for saying yes to the deal and he should have ignored his offer then none of this would have happened to him.
If anything it’s coercion..which is still bad. Bought consent isn’t valid consent imo. White guy knows he doesn’t want to but doing so for someone else.
Let’s see where this goes to…can’t wait to see them fuck. Yes that’s where my priorities are! (Without rape of course but no rape isn’t guaranteed in BL…unfortunate truth).
Well we all know white hair guy is very cunning and clearly a red flag but imo the black haired guy is too dumb and gullible and easily convinced by others.
I just want to see when the black haired guy will come to know the truth about that little guy who is fooling him too and what will be his reaction.
Yeah Black haired cutie is naive as hell, I don’t see what he likes about the twink. Wake up dude..
I feel like he should’ve taken the hint that his crush or lover is into rough during sex. He got big hints with how twink was acting but no, he’s so naive…sigh.
We all know white hair is gonna take that to his advantage lol.
Yeah I very much agree with you on this. I hope to see black haired guy comes to love sex with white hair guy and forget about that twink lol
exactly cause he was completely soft the whole time he’s being manipulated into having sex he doesn’t really want