I don't mind the artstyle, but what I do mind is that the seme is so bland-psycho if that makes any sense? Like he hasn't shown that he has any other traits than being just crazy obsessed. Give me at least some intriguing intelligent masterplan-making psycho if you're gonna go that route, or a tortured backstory that made him crazy. He needs some more nuance to make him interesting
It's fucked up but I couldn't stop reading. I feel like maybe it could even have a psychological tag since it's a lot about uncovering the small things that drives them personally to do the fucked up things they do... I also like that we're slowly uncovering the backstory for the brothers. At first Jingi seemed most fucked up but turns out the brother has A LOT deeper shit going on. And myung is definitely developing stockholm syndrome. Can't wait to see how messed up it's gonna get when white hair goes psycho because myung doesn't like him back. Is Jingi gonna protect him from his own brother?
I agree with what everyone is saying but.. idk why but this story actually stayed with me a few days. Usually I'd just forget a random bl but this one kept popping up in my head. I think it's because the story had such potential and the art is gorgeous (honestly one of the hottest tops I've seen..). I'm not sure why the author had to rush it so much, because if they didn't and really explored more of the dungeons and relationship between them then this could have been something really great.
I read now that sadly the author had passed away. That explains why it had to be a bit rushed.. I'm sure if the author had more time this would have been amazing.